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@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ Ln 469: "8 cores..." The i7-4702HQ has 4 cores and 8 threads, not 8 cores.
Ln 551 - “above are more moderately attenuated” revise.
-> More understandable and correctly formulated in line 718 to 722.
-> More understandable and correctly formulated in line 716 to 721.
Ln 524 - Figure 4 "...xz plane..." should be xy plane
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ Ln 578 “This allows us to discuss everything in detail” – irrelevant or sh
Ln 711 - “The KDE-based estimation illustrates this behavior very accurate” – Revise
-> This sentence was very daring and incomprehensible. We tried to explain the situation in greater detail. Please refer to lines 921 to 935.
-> This sentence was very daring and incomprehensible. We tried to explain the situation in greater detail. Please refer to lines 927 to 932.
Ln 713 – “the teal square” – It is not a square.
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ Ln 720 – “In the end, it is a question of optimal harmony between transition
Ln 726 “At the end, in the here shown examples we only searched for a global maxima” – revise english
-> The sentence was fixed in line xxx.
-> The sentence was fixed in line 947.
Ln 733 – “Compared to other state-of-the-art solutions, the setup time is only a few hours and does not require any expert knowledge or hardware.” This comparision is not done in the paper. The authors should be more specific given that this property of the purposed system is declared important, and so should be given with ore detail and (m^2 per hour) and compared with the coverage time of other systems.
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ Ln 733 – “Compared to other state-of-the-art solutions, the setup time is on
Ln 754 – “opens up completely new possibilities when” – revise tone of writing.
-> The sentence was fixed in line xxx.
-> The sentence was fixed in line 939.
-> Again, thank your very much for this very detailed review. Your suggestions have really improved this work and we hope that you are as happy as we are about the result.