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From the middle of the paper the quality of the English decreases with several sentences with errors, some of them were identified.
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-> We have fixed several errors on our own as well as the recommendations made.
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Given that the authors declare that this is an update they should be more clear on what was already done. We also consider that the authors use auto citation excessively (7 in 32) and or compress the self-citation or increase the comparison with other works.
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